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今日は, Luke. My name is Emerald, and I am a fellow classmate of yours from Room 2. I was intrigued by your sense of descriptive language, and your final sentence was my favorite. Maybe you could add an image of the motionless scene you were describing. Have you come up with an intriguing title to replace the title currently? 決別.
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今日は, Luke.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Emerald, and I am a fellow classmate of yours from Room 2.
I was intrigued by your sense of descriptive language, and your final sentence was my favorite.
Maybe you could add an image of the motionless scene you were describing.
Have you come up with an intriguing title to replace the title currently?
決別.