Mountains rising into the blue sky
Stone slowly crumbling off the cliffs
White fluffy clouds gracefully gliding across the sky
Rocks rolling down deserted slopes
Grass and moss resting peacefully
My class was writing poems.
We got given a photo and we had to write a poem about the photo.
Hi luke I like your poem and and can you add some more words, bye
ReplyDeleteHello Luke
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing. Something I think you did well was using descriptive words my favourite sentence is when you wrote "White fluffy clouds gracefully gliding across the sky"
Something I think you could do is make the title a bit more exciting.
Well done Luke :)