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Tuesday 7 May 2019

The ocean

The ocean


Waves crashing down on the sand
Fish swimming free in the depths of the sea
Wind howling in my ear
Salt water dripping into my mouth
Birds flying over the sea
The smell of salt and water fills my nose
For the past few days my class has been doing poems about the ocean.
I liked making the google drawing.
I found it hard to think about words to describe the ocean.

2 comments:

  1. Hi luke this is Arnav I like your google drawing it looks awesome,and you forgot the full stop in your poem and one can you teach me that how did you do the Ocean sign and the blue sky and the water.

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    1. You will see a mistake in my comment,I was going to say one thing.

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