Watermelon
Tastes like water and sweet
Little seeds scattered throughout the melon
Smells sweet
Round like a ball
Red rough insides
Cold juicy flesh
Monday 25 March 2019
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Hi Luke, I like how you have included some colour
ReplyDeleteyour descriptive words are very creative
but next time reread it and make sure it makes sense