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I like the way you have encluded what you did well and what you could work on. I agree with you, that you need to make your writting easier to see. over all, your bookmark was very interesting to read
Hello Luke. I like how you explained why you want your family to visit your blog. Also I think you could change the dark colors of your writing in the black text boxes brighter so they are easier to see. Have you shared it with your buddy?
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Annyeonghaseyo, Luke. I am Emerald. I will share what I think about this blog post:
ReplyDeleteI liked the rainbow color scheme. It catches my eye.
What I think you could do differently, though, is making dark colored fonts a little brighter so people could see properly.
What you could change is how small the QR (Quick Response) code is, just so people can see it better.
Have you shared this with a buddy?
Your rainbow color scheme draws me into reading your book mark. Your QR code is easy to find, and is not squished with other, images.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you have encluded what you did well and what you could work on.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, that you need to make your writting easier to see.
over all, your bookmark was very interesting to read
Hello Luke. I like how you explained why you want your family to visit your blog. Also I think you could change the dark colors of your writing in the black text boxes brighter so they are easier to see. Have you shared it with your buddy?
ReplyDeleteI like how you said why we need to visit your blog
ReplyDeleteI think you need to work on using a title