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Pigeon impossible

Pigeon impossible

May 10th  2012
Washington dc

Breaking news an unknown flying box scares citizens in Washington DC with lasers and rockets now let's go to someone in the action, to you Steve. The box is flying  around shooting lasers and rockets! What? What’s that? Oh my gosh it’s a missile! This guy is now holding onto the box and flying up to the missile! Huh what’s that? BAGEL! Well back to us the missile was heading for Moscow Russia but it blew up in the sty, wait how did nothing get damaged? It was a missile!

I learnt how to write like a reporter in this task.


2 comments:

  1. Hello Luke, i like your newspaper story, i liked the way you made it say BAGEL!, maybe next time check your spelling

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    1. Thanks for the feed back Lucas and next time I will check my spelling :D

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